Are you working on a book proposal or writing your first or 100th draft of a book you desire to see published? Are you feeling unsure of what it needs to be taken seriously by agents or editors or even your readers? Are you overwhelmed with information overload about the dos and don’ts of it all. Let me help.

With more than 20 years' experience in book publishing as an acquisitions editor, collaborative writer, and literary agent, I will give you objective and professional feedback on your project. Get editorial comments on the content you submit, suggestions for organization, and focused feedback addressing questions you may have such as:

  • What trends or felt needs should my writing address/reflect?

  • Are my ideas any good?

  • What are the strengths and weaknesses of how I'm sharing my message?

  • Am I on the right track?

  • What do I need to fix?

  • What is my authentic voice and how can I write true to it?

  • How do I tell my story without being sued or hurting those I love?

  • How can I build my platform so my voice is heard?

  • Who is my audience, and what do they need to hear from me?

  • Should I publish this on my own or should I try to get an agent to secure a traditional publishing deal?

My goal is to help you get the answers to these questions and more so you can have confidence and clarity about the next step in your writing and publishing journey.

  1. Click the graphic or the button below to book this special COACHING + CRITIQUE offer.

  2. Send me 10 pages (or up to 2,500 words) of your work in progress (WIP), your book proposal, or any pages where you are feeling stuck.

  3. Schedule your coaching session for at least ONE WEEK AFTER you plan to submit your WIP.

  4. I’ll read it and provide editorial feedback on what you submit.

  5. We will discuss it all during a 45-minute coaching session.

That’s it!

10 pages.

45 minutes.

$347.

And believe it or not, we will dig in and those forty-five minutes will feel like a relief of the last 12 months or 20 years you’ve been searching for the right help.

One coaching + critique client came back after publishing her memoir and said:

“It is PUBLISHED!!!! Thank you Jevon for your love, encouragement and expertise in helping me write Jesus story in transforming my life. Your book is SOOOO beautiful and powerful!! without a doubt, it was a major contributor to directing this “once was no writer” to AUTHOR! Your book, your coaching, your words, your love was HUGE in my writing life for I had NO idea what I was doing. So very grateful. It is ALL God…you said yes and continue to say yes and because of your obedience, I said yes and continue to say YES! Thank you with all my heart!”

—Carolyn Deck, Above the Turbulence: Your Ticket Out of Pain To Purpose

Another said,

"Your evaluation provided me with an invaluable roadmap to improve my manuscript."

—Robert Justice, They Can't Take Your Name (runner-up for the 2020 Sisters in Crime Eleanor Taylor Bland Award)

NOW, LET’S DO THE SAME FOR YOU!

When you click below to book this service, purchase the critique + coaching package, then schedule your appointment for one week after the time you expect to submit your 20 pages. Next, follow the instructions contained in the confirmation email for how to submit your WIP.

I’m looking forward to our time together!


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